When i was seven,
I was in heaven,
Coz ‘morrows my bday
And none like any day,
I sang, I danced,
Together with my dinosaur,
Coz all i wanted was,
A pretty little barbie doll,
I slept, i woke,
Tossing and turning all around,
Thinkung whether it’d be pink or blue
And behold, the next day comes,
And i get my little gift,
Wrapped in ribbons an balloons,
The prettiest thing i,ve seen,
I run, i jump, i laugh,
Coz heres my dream come true.
Then i saw a girl
Covered in rags,
Her smile like the shining sun,
But eyes like a beaten puppy,
Then and there i knew,
What would give me happiness,
I went and placed the doll,
On her little hands,
The smile that spread on her lips, i decided
Was ever the most beautiful gift i had……
So lovely people, heres my first try for poem,
Comments reviews, anything will make my day..
AWW! This is so touching! Your words evoke emotion, powerful emotion I must say!
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Awww
Thanku so muchhh
U cant knw how elated i am now….
Thanku sooo much
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You deserve it. I am just stating a fact. 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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A double twist! I like the twist about the dinosaur and the Barbie doll even better than getting a gift and giving it away.
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Hahhhaa
Thanku soo muchh
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